Flawless actions from a striding mind.
An accurate bearing from a broken compass.
Hopeful thoughts that need a good riddance.
Oh! Locked to the water closet!
Farts and burns weed to a red smoke
simultaneously,
chews his breakfast whilst he defecates.
Categorically,
boils the yam,
breaks the egg shell
pours water on the hot frying pan
and fries a gall bladder instead of a yolk.
Snowy, still prepares tea with ice-chilled water
Drunk in tea, sleeps, snores like an elephant
and dreams about an honey moon,
while enjoying respite
on the grave in a dark night.
His wavering feelings about a flamboyant wedding. Parked at the garage are the tyres of a bicycle,when the Bugatti for the ceremony
queues for the next turn at the bus stop.
Prepared for the bride after the wedding,
the Garden of Wonders,
In an Hallucination Estate!


Mindfully funny. Nice one
ReplyDeleteNice adjective...lol
DeleteThanks Nikkypoetry :)
What a very creative poetry...he has indeed lost it.
ReplyDeleteJoyous joy...glad u finally drove by.
DeleteWhat a funny poetry...eating his breakfast while he defecates! GROSS!!!
ReplyDeleteLogical perhaps, rather than funny! Smiles! Thanks for passing by, Akin!
DeleteA word for the lazy...
ReplyDeleteA word for the foolish..
A word for our leaders...
A word for those who wants to do exploit without wanting to sacrifice...
A word for those applying right efforts in the wrong lane, all in the name of hustle...
A word for Kleavajimcy(stop eating and shitting at dsame time Bro...lol)
...A word...
which is enough for the wise.
Hahahah! Damilare...lwkmd!
DeleteThat Gross? Hell no...I don't even shit! *covers_Nose*
Nice insight to the subject matter... U rock!
DeleteLol...Jimcy be forming porsche that he is! *yimu
DeleteDifferent wrong strokes for different good strides.
ReplyDeleteHe takes an iced tea in a snowy weather, he fried an egg bladder instead of a yolk, The Bugatti for his wedding being used as a taxi at d bus stop....A confused mind indeed, A lost one... A CONFUSED WORLD!
Such is the world we live... Glad at your comment! Thanks, Sir Kay.
DeleteNice1 .......keep it up
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDeleteHmmn...Interesting!
ReplyDeletekeep writing!
-Mercy
Thanks Mercy!
DeleteKeep reading! *winks
Uwc dearie!
DeleteOluwafolajimi, what a creative write-up... You should hook up with a Newspaper organisation already.
ReplyDeleteSky is thy limit Bro.
Make I dey fart as I dey burn my weed dey go for here! FagbOooooo!
Heheheheh...Brodally! Thanks for your kind words Bro, they are highly appreciated..Good to see you finally found your way here!
DeleteMake I dey cover nose dey park ur burnt weed dey go! Lmao!
Snores like an elephant? Lol, ow does an elephant snore? Very funny piece. Keep it up bro
ReplyDeleteLols! ***Like the sound of a trailers' horn***
DeleteGlad you likeey, Tof.
Jah Bless!
Lols! ***Like the sound of a trailers' horn***
ReplyDeleteGlad you likeey, Tof.
Jah Bless!
Awwww! I've missed a lot here ooo! The piece is funny and poetic at the same time. Keep it up Jimcy.
ReplyDeleteThe write ups still needs readers though..."please read us" **the writeups shout**
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming around!
"The Bugatti for the ceremony queues for the next turn at the bus stop"...Something like, apply the right effort in d wrong manner.
ReplyDeleteSuch is the case of a secondary school boy who thinks of buying Ferrari and getting married at such age, even when her Mum sells corn down the street.
Such is the case of the young day Internet fraudsters...Still applying efforts in the wrong direction. Hopeful thoughts that needs a good riddance indeed! The poem covers all, The Lost Minds.
This is great...prepare for an oscar award, Folajimi. *WINKS*
I am stunned at your great understanding of the poetry, Bro. Bravo!
DeleteLol...Oscar award koor, Neymar award niih! *BigGrins*
DeleteNice piece
ReplyDeleteThe story of a visionless young man. Marveled at your ability, as though you are an Engineering student. WELLDONE!
ReplyDelete@Enny, thanks... I am flattered!
DeleteMore grease 2 ur elbow love. Nice write up. Shows d visionlessness of sum pple, reaping where u didn't sow. Expecting much, wen u av litu. Dat guy doesn't knw wat he is doin.
ReplyDelete-Adenike FBS.
Hmmmn...clueless and visionless indeed. SUCH is the case of the world we live now... Good riddance to bad rubbish. Glad you came around, Adenike. Merci!
DeleteCool piece...
ReplyDeleteThanks Bro!
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